Micro Fiction

Can you write a piece of fiction in (or in less than) 140 characters?

He drives his itching fists home late late one night, burying them in her swollen stomach.

There is an alternative version too but I felt it didn’t need to be made anymore obvious.

What do you think? Is it clear what is happening or have I been too vague? Comment with your examples of micro fiction, if you’d like. Or you can critique my attempt. I’d love to hear from you!